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Lesson #2 - Personal Statement

hi, i am back 􀰂􀅖happy􏿿

i got many request about sharing experience. so, 􀔃􀄓yes􏿿 here i write. now i'm going to share about how to make the good personal statament/motivation letter. i got this tips from IDP Edication Consultant.
anyone who knows what is personal statement?  is it the same as motivation letter?

the answer 􀰂􀇽yes􏿿 its same

personal statement is a crucial part of university applications. write it in just 300-500 words you have to convince your chosen university that you are the best applicant, and that they should make you an offer immediately. instead of motivation letter is ans essay to convince your big motivation to continue your study. based on those two understanding, known that both of personal statement and motivation letter is the SAME

now, i'm going to share about the tips:
1. introduction
make sure you introduce yourself clearly. remember!! you aren't *celebrity, politicians, or professor* that everyone knows you
2. explain why are you applyin? explain about your interest and correlate ot woth the subject/major you intend to.
3. show your EXCITEMENT
4. write chunky middle paragraph by #evidence your interest and #your SKILL
5. write your personal branding #why are you special? ans #what make you stand out?
6. clossing
make site ymto close your personal statement properly but still interesting

-----------------AVOID-------------------
*VERBAL DIARRHEA
*ARROGANT
*COPY PASTE
*FLOWERY LANGUAGE
*REPETITION

so, are you intended to write a personal statement? START now and EDIT tomorrow

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